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  • Jimmi
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    He looked like a sword of moonlight made human standing on the nighttime steps, hair the impossible colour of childhood innocence grown too long, locks straying at the nape of his neck and cheeks.

    Mám len matné tušenie, ale zaujímal by ma aj doslovný preklad. Myslím to, čo k čomu patrí:
    Vyzeral ako ( niečo ) človek stojaci na nočných schodoch... To "a sword of moonlight made" rozvíja to slovo človek?
    Ku čomu patrí to "made" ? akože toho človeka vytvoril meč (? lúč) mesačného človeka. Alebo je to vo význame, ako v mesačnom svetle vyzeral človek?

    Díky, vôbec nerozumiem stavbe tej vety.

    Celý ten odsek znie:

    He looked like a sword of moonlight made human standing on the nighttime steps, hair the impossible colour of childhood innocence grown too long, locks straying at the nape of his neck and cheeks. A soft shock fell into his eyes, which glittered with the dazzling elusiveness of silver light upon water. The moonlight had been crafted by a Renaissance sculptor, each plane of his face severely angled and starkly perfect. His cheekbones and jawline were smooth as the slashes of a knife. His nose, chin, forehead, were shaped by centuries of aristocrats to slope into the same elegant curves as an ornament they commissioned would have been expected to.
    His skin was the same colour as marble, which was oddly fitting for the sharply defined lines that made his throat and chest and arms. It was a beauty that seemed designed, like a Greek statue, a celebration of strength in a form that looked fragile as the stem of an expensive wineglass. The crafted hollow at the base of his long throat, the sleek fan of his collarbone and the rounded rise of his shoulders looked far too carefully created to be anything but impossibly delicate.
    White material curved from snake-hips. This attire seemed absolutely natural for this frail moment of beauty, quivering pale and lovely as a candle flame.
    Then she squinted against the moonlight and assembled the pieces of that face for recognition instead of aesthetic admiration, and realised it was Draco Malfoy.

    V tejto chvíli mi došla slovná zásoba na takýto opis.
  • Elza
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    He looked like a sword of moonlight made human standing on the nighttime steps, hair the impossible colour of childhood innocence grown too long, locks straying at the nape of his neck and cheeks.

    Vypadal jako útlý paprsek měsíčního světla, co na sebe vzal lidskou podobu, když tam stál na schodišti pohlceném tmou noci; přerostlé vlasy nevídané barvy dětské nevinnosti se mu lehce vlnily podél tváří a dovádivě hladily šíji.
  • Jimmi
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    Seš génius. To s tým, že mesiac vzal na seba ľudskú podobu ma napadlo dnes ráno (presnejšie mesačným lúčom vytvorený človek, na tvoju poetiku nemám), ale až teraz som sa k tomu dostala. Márne premýšľam nad slovenskou verziou slova dovádivě (laškovne?). No a idem sa trápiť nad tým zvyškom. Dokonca som si dnes prečítala Michelangelov životopis (zaujal pri hľadaní popisov jeho sôch).

    Strašne moc ďakujem.